T2+Explain



**MY LEARNING TARGETS**

My next step in writing is to proof read and edit my writing carefully e.g " The wing attack and wing defense can only move in their own goal third and centre and the same goes for the goal attack and goal defense except that they are aloud in the own semicircle to defend or shoot". The wing attack and wing defence can only move in their own goal third centre third. The same goes for the goal attack and goal defence except that they are in the own semicircle to defend or shoot

I will achieve this by reading my work out loud to myself and identifying simple, compound and complex sentences so that I know when to make a new sentence or add punctuation like a comma.

Date achieved: //Mrs Stock//

Great writing Elise like you said "looking deeply into your writing". You have all the basics there e.g. general statement, present tense, variety of sentences. Now focus on the editing stage.



There are four basic lines and three thirds with two circles on either side of the court. These lines are lines that everybody in the court during the game need to keep to.

__**Thursday 19th May**__

**What is Netball?**

Netball is a fast game that you must be fit in in order to play a good game. In a team you have 10 players although 7 people are only aloud on the court at once.

There are 7 positions on the court, GK (Goal keep), GD (Goal defense), WD (Wing defense), C (Centre), WA (Wing Attack), GA (Goal attack) and GS (Goal shoot). Depending on what position you are play, you are only aloud on some parts of the court.

There are four basic lines and 3 basic thirds that everyone on the courts need to keep to. The 2 goal lines and the 2 transverse lines and the 2 goal thirds and the centre third. The goal shoot and goal keep can only move in their own goal third while the centre can move down every third. The wing attack and wing defense can only move in their own goal third and centre and the same goes for the goal attack and goal defense except that they are aloud in the own semicircle to defend or shoot.

The whole point of the game is to get the most amount of goals in and try to stop the other team from getting the goal in the net. The game is split into 4 courters, each 10 minutes long. Once the courter is over you have a break then swap sides. The break is the only time when you are aloud to swap positions unless somebody calls time because they are hurt and need somebody else to come on for them.

===**Although netball is a fun and easy way to get fit, there is also a lot of competition. When the game is finished, you score gets added up and goes on a board. The board shows where your team is coming in your grade. The best grade you can be in is the A grade which has most schools A and B teams in. ** === = =

= = ===**L.I. We are learning to use the structure of explain to give an explanation of what light is and to use present tense. ** === ===** S.C. My writing ** === Good but do you understand what you have said about photons. BY ROCKY
 * has a general statement at the beginning
 * is sequenced in time order or clearly explains in a logical order
 * is written in present tense

__**Wednesday 4th May 2011**__

**Light**

<span style="font-size: 120%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Light is a portion of electromagnetic radiation that is visible to the human eye. It can speed up to incredible paces and

<span style="font-size: 120%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Light can speed up to approximately 186,282 miles per second but has been said that it can reach up to 300,000 km per second.

<span style="font-size: 120%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">There are many natural sources of things that give off light like, the sun, flames, gas and thermal resources. The particals that come from these things are called photons. Photons are particles that make up light. It travels through the air.